I wrote a fanfic,check it out or don't I don't mind
#1
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12059537/1/...alls-story


Here it is,I`m not the best typist so there may be some mistakes sorry

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#2
Is this the one you and Darth were working on?
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#3
(07-26-2016, 05:19 PM)Hanaurie Wrote: Is this the one you and Darth were working on?

No, it is not it's something I have written solo

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#4
Oh, okay that's cool.
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#5
(07-26-2016, 05:28 PM)Hanaurie Wrote: Oh, okay that's cool.

Leave a review of the story on the website if you like?

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#6
I haven't read it all the way, but i'd possibly be willing to edit it for you, if you'd like. (Check for typos, grammar/spelling errors, repetitiveness, etc)
Or I could simply critique it as I read. C:
I'm about as edgy as a ball of raw cookie dough 
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#7
I actually read part of this aloud on the discord stream. It was an entertaining experience, I think everyone who was there will agree.

Good on you for writing this, E-smith.
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#8
What's the discord stream ?

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#9
The Shack has a Discord chat.
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#10
Thanks!! Haven't seen you for a while so hi

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